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Chapter 12

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After a beat, Perry gave a short nod, like he was adjusting the file in his mental cabinet. Not just the story, but the people in it.

If Perry White has a mental file on this situation, it is only a matter of time before he puts everything together and discovers who Kallen Ellis really is. That man is part reporter, part blood hound. Hmmm, will he tell Lois about his theories when they finally surface? It might be fascinating to see that scene.

Meanwhile, what is the Clark disappearance backstory?

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They’d agreed to move fast. Kal needed the details. So why did her fingers hesitate?

Why indeed? Lois' intuition is working in the background. Once she figures out that Kallen, Clark and Superman are one and the same the fireworks are gonna be impressive! peep

Really having fun with this story. Looking forward to the next parts.


Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

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