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Here is the next chapter: Protect

So, pretty eventful I think, but fairly typical with both Clarks
Anyway, thoughts with the abilities and events?

I'm finishing up the last chapter tonight. Just 2 scenes left. I'm REALLY hopeful to have it done by Friday.

Great chapter! I love this alt universe! Looking forward to more!

Ack!!!! Sooooo intense! LOVE how you did this -- both with this use of Kal's aura and with having Clark there to help/support Kal. Wow!

And PLEASE let H.G. Wells have a solution to getting Kal home!!!

Phenomenal chapter!

-Bek

Yay, H.G. Wells is on his way. This was an awesome chapter. You really have a knack for writing rescues.

Yes, this was an awesome and intense scene!! I was looking forward to seeing everyone’s reactions!! And you’re exactly right, bakasi, Jess is AMAZING when it comes to writing the action scenes/rescues!!

Sara

Hi! I see you're new? Welcome! Glad you're enjoying this universe



Thanks ^_^ I had been itching to write this scene for a LONG time, but there was just so much to lay out before getting there.

As for Wells.... well, all might become well.



Yup, he is....
And thanks, action scenes are admittedly my favorite to do.



^_^ Thanks, you certainly help me make them better though, and help me strengthen my weak areas.