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Anchor: Epilogue -- Jonathan KentI'll admit to writing this part very late a couple nights ago, feeling like I just needed the story to have...a tad bit more (especially given some of the comments calling Jonathan Kent out for his behavior!  ) So, I know this doesn't solve everything, but maybe it at least provides a little glimpse of the way forward for AltClark and his relationship with the Kents. As usual, thank you all for reading! I appreciate the support and comments!!  What do you think? -Bek 
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So glad Jonathan finally, FINALLY saw the light and realized he has a lot of damage to repair. I really hope Clark can experience at least some parental love now. It's long overdue. Thanks for including this.  It helps round out a lot of earlier frustration I had (if you hadn't noticed) 
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So glad Jonathan finally, FINALLY saw the light and realized he has a lot of damage to repair. I really hope Clark can experience at least some parental love now. It's long overdue. Thanks for including this. It helps round out a lot of earlier frustration I had (if you hadn't noticed) Hahaha, Yes, I definitely DID notice, and really -- you're the reason I felt I HAD to write this part!  I knew I was going to have Clark call his dad on it at the end of Anchor II, but I think this final little bit was necessary to see that Jonathan was serious about making amends. AltClark definitely needs a strong relationship with both of the Kents, I think. Thanks for reading!! -Bek
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I'm so glad you wrote this. I can feel Jonathan's pain and discomfort. I mean I get why he would be distant at first. He was trying to protect his family, but then he was so stubborn. I'm glad you fixed this and showed us Jonathan's side. Great job.
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I'm so glad you wrote this. I can feel Jonathan's pain and discomfort. I mean I get why he would be distant at first. He was trying to protect his family, but then he was so stubborn. I'm glad you fixed this and showed us Jonathan's side. Great job. Yay, I'm glad you appreciated this little extra part!  And now I'm mulling over some sort of a sequel cuz I would really like to explore how AltClark's life grows in this universe.  Thanks for reading!! -Bek
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Oh come on! We have to see how everything goes with Alt-Clark in this universe! The poor man needs a life of his own. By the way, fabulous epilogue. Jonathan has many bridges to cross and fences to mend before this gentle stranger from another universe will be comfortable around him. Thankfully, Jonathan is very good at doing both tasks. So glad to have you here SuperBek. 
Morgana
A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
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Oh come on! We have to see how everything goes with Alt-Clark in this universe! The poor man needs a life of his own. I hear you! I'll be working on finish up part 3 soon, and then... I've got a few ideas that have been bouncing around in my head! You're not the only one who wants to see AltClark's life going forward from here! By the way, fabulous epilogue. Jonathan has many bridges to cross and fences to mend before this gentle stranger from another universe will be comfortable around him. Thankfully, Jonathan is very good at doing both tasks. So glad to have you here SuperBek. Thank you! I'm so glad to be here. This community has been very welcoming, and I'm a bit sad that it took me so long to "delurk". And thank you again for reading my story and leaving such wonderful feedback! I appreciate all of it!  -Bek
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