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#295008 01/20/23 02:16 AM
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She's really gotten attached to Clark! Maybe it's the mystery. He was just too seemingly open with nothing to hide in the show, so she ignored him, lol.

And wow! What a rescue! But now I'm worried that people might think he caused the explosion...

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Ahhh! Poor Clark! D: Don't just leave it here!


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Originally Posted by PuffyTiger
But now I'm worried that people might think he caused the explosion...

That's my concern too!! eek

Love that he saved those people, and Houdini being nearby and anxious... Lois might put the pieces together pretty soon. smile1

Can't wait for the next installment!!

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Wow. I can’t wait for more. I hope Lois meets Clark again soon!

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Ack!! I love that he made so public a rescue! But he’s got to be freaking out for sure now!! And OH NO… I can see why people would think that it was Clark who caused the explosion, but whinging whinging

Can’t wait for more!!!

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Yeah, things are going to be a little more difficult for Clark. But a lunkhead sometimes needs a push in the right direction. Thank you all for reading


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Hi Barbara!
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In the faint light of dusk, Lois saw MagiKal stand on a small ledge that surrounded one of the older brickstone buildings on the fringes of the Southside.
Going to do a tightrope act? Sans rope.

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The sight of him was a welcome distraction after a busy news week, filled with a series of arsons.
Right during Crush?

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Suddenly, a burst of flames erupted seemingly out of nowhere. Lois had seen fire breathers before, but usually they carried a torch. Another burst of flames erupted, this time from a spot on the building several feet higher up. How had he even got there so quickly? A third eruption followed, even more impressive than the last one and from yet another spot.
How does he get flames? He’s not lighting his own flatulence, is he?

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A deafening explosion rocked the building on the other side of the street. Shards of glass rained down on the crowd below. Excited cheers turned to startled cries as flames burst through the broken windows. MagiKal was forgotten.
Yeah, am not sure that showing a fire trick in a neighborhood plagued by arson is a good idea. Cops might get curious.

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Lois blinked. *He carried it?*
No, it’s just smoke and mirrors.

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Houdini?" Lois whispered. "Is Clark here, too?"
Yeah, up there.

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She was desperate to talk to someone about what she'd just witnessed
Yes, MagiKal set a building on fire, then used a prefabricated platform to “rescue” several audience members.

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Did you see that?" Someone next to her grumbled, outraged. "He put people in danger for a magic trick."
See? See?

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dizzy OH NO!


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Originally Posted by Morgana
dizzy OH NO!

True! Thanks for leaving feedback.


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