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FDK: His Girl Lois 5/? #29399 04/27/06 12:13 AM
Joined: Mar 2006 Posts: 108 Hell...oh, i meant college M MaraElaineKent OP Hack from Nowheresville
OP MaraElaineKent Hack from Nowheresville M Joined: Mar 2006 Posts: 108 Hell...oh, i meant college	Intriguing!... So this is what Lois feels like, huh. Interesting way of showing us, giving us no Clark for a chapter. Love that you give us clues abour where he is (sirens in the distance), love how Lois is her intrepid self, bribing officers and sneaking into places to interview crazy people. Nice touch with the Linda King tete-a-tete (NOTE: how do you get accents working?) I feel for Lois and Clark in this one; it's really making it clear to me how frustrating pre-revelation was for them. I'm counting down until he tells her!

Re: FDK: His Girl Lois 5/? #29400 04/27/06 05:47 AM
Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797 T TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner
TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner T Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797	Ditto what MaraElaine said! I have to specifically point out, though, that I always enjoy your way with words so very much. You put lovely images in my mind. And you write a really mean, as in great, dialogue! I very much enjoyed this Clark-less part, but I'm looking forward to having the lying lunkhead back next time... and maybe seeing him consider the possibility of lying to his could-soon-be-ex-wife a bit less? Bring on the rest, Marcy!! Ann

Re: FDK: His Girl Lois 5/? #29401 04/27/06 07:12 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK: His Girl Lois 5/? #29402 04/28/06 05:43 PM
Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 101 Tennessee in the Good ole USA Kent28 Hack from Nowheresville
Kent28 Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 101 Tennessee in the Good ole USA	Well, I just sent the next part off to Labby...I hope you guys will like it. In the next part, the lunkhead is back. And hopefully some things are going to start heading toward resolution. I'll be out of town this weekend, but hopefully I'll be able to post by midweek or so, as soon as I get it back from Labby and return from my trip. I'm just one post ahead with this, so thanks for your patience with my erratic lack-of-a-schedule posting and learn-as-I-go style. Marcy (Elrond's blessing at the departure of the company from Rivendell) "Farewell, and may the blessing of Elves and Men and all Free Folk go with you. May the stars shine upon your faces!" -Lord of the Rings, J.R.R. Tolkien

Re: FDK: His Girl Lois 5/? #29403 04/28/06 09:59 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Marcy Another great part! Tricia

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