Intriguing!...
So this is what Lois feels like, huh. Interesting way of showing us, giving us no Clark for a chapter. Love that you give us clues abour where he is (sirens in the distance), love how Lois is her intrepid self, bribing officers and sneaking into places to interview crazy people. Nice touch with the Linda King tete-a-tete (NOTE: how do you get accents working?) I feel for Lois and Clark in this one; it's really making it clear to me how frustrating pre-revelation was for them. I'm counting down until he tells her!
