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Anchor: Part I -- Clark Kent (1-3)Let me know what you think! This story (Part I -- Clark Kent, that is) clocks in at ~115,000 words, so I hope you all are in it for the long haul with me! -Bek
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Hack from Nowheresville
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*Does the first comment dance! *
Heeey, I've been hoping you'd post your stuff! I'm super excited to read it. I just read the first chapter, and wow! You capture the mood so very well! I love alt-Clark stories, he's in such a difficult position and I enjoy seeing how people help him out.
Know that I'll be eagerly waiting and cheering along in the background until it's done posting. Then it will be time to reeeeaaad!
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*Does the first comment dance! *
Heeey, I've been hoping you'd post your stuff! I'm super excited to read it. I just read the first chapter, and wow! You capture the mood so very well! I love alt-Clark stories, he's in such a difficult position and I enjoy seeing how people help him out.
Know that I'll be eagerly waiting and cheering along in the background until it's done posting. Then it will be time to reeeeaaad! I hope I'll have it all posted by about mid December, if I can keep up with a good schedule! Thanks for checking out the first chapter I hope you like the rest of the story just as much ![smile1 smile1](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/1syellow1.gif) -Bek
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I am very intrigued by the premise and look forward to the next post ^_^. I really feel bad for this Clark and hope things will turn around for him ![grovel grovel](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/grovel.gif)
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I'm intrigued as well. I'm not usually a huge fan of Alt-Clark stories. I like how you've portrayed him, though. He doesn't seem to be quite as depressed as I'd imagine him, which is a good thing, actually. I'm curious how the story between him and the widowed Lois will play out. Can she accept a different Clark? What will happen in a world where Nor was victorious. And how are these two Clarks connected?
Can't wait to read more
It's never too dark to be cool.
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I am very intrigued by the premise and look forward to the next post ^_^. ![clap clap](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/clap.gif) I really feel bad for this Clark and hope things will turn around for him ![grovel grovel](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/grovel.gif) Me too! ![wink wink](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/wink.gif) Thank you for reading! -Bek
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I'm intrigued as well. I'm not usually a huge fan of Alt-Clark stories. I like how you've portrayed him, though. He doesn't seem to be quite as depressed as I'd imagine him, which is a good thing, actually. He's got a lot going on, but I think on the whole, he is a hopeful person. Or at least, he wants to be! I'm curious how the story between him and the widowed Lois will play out. Can she accept a different Clark? What will happen in a world where Nor was victorious. And how are these two Clarks connected? All great questions! ![clap clap](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/clap.gif)
Last edited by SuperBek; 11/21/22 03:02 PM.
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I didn't think I would like this, but I love the perspective you have. I like how it is in first-person. This is going to be very interesting. I look forward to more. And oh boy, Alt-Clark doesn't have to return to his world.
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I didn't think I would like this, but I love the perspective you have. I like how it is in first-person. Thank you! It's difficult for me to write in first person (although for whatever reason, I find Clark easier to write in first person than Lois....her brain rambles too much and seems to jump all over the place! ![jump jump](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/jump3.gif) )...and writing in present tense is also challenging.... This is going to be very interesting. I look forward to more. ![clap clap](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/clap.gif) Thank you for reading! -Bek
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Boards Chief Administrator Pulitzer
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I am in just complete awe at this! I want to give you ALLLLL the comments but I'm currently on my phone, so that's not happening now. I can hope, as you post, that I can come close to landing adequate feedback! ![notworthy notworthy](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/notworthy.gif) For now, I just wanted to say this is amazing and so, so evocative! Amazing writing and emotions and ideas and... Yeah. All the things! Sara ![smile smile](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/smile.gif)
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I am in just complete awe at this! I want to give you ALLLLL the comments but I'm currently on my phone, so that's not happening now. I can hope, as you post, that I can come close to landing adequate feedback! ![notworthy notworthy](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/notworthy.gif) For now, I just wanted to say this is amazing and so, so evocative! Amazing writing and emotions and ideas and... Yeah. All the things! Sara ![smile smile](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/smile.gif) Awwww, thank you!!!! ![hyper hyper](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/hyper.gif) I don't know what else to say, so I'll just say I hope you like the rest of it just as much!! ![blush blush](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/blush.gif) -Bek
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