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  Very nice MDL! I really thought it was Lois the whole time! Welcome back and I am glad you will be bringing some fun and that you are here to stay  ~Lois Lane Wanna Be
"Live with intention.
Walk to the edge.
Listen Hard.
Practice wellness.
Play with abandon.
Laugh.
Choose with no regret.
Continue to learn.
Appreciate your friends.
Do what you love.
Live as if this is all there is."
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Oh, that was funny! I, too, assumed that Lois was the woman doing the fantasizing, but I can see Cat cuddling with a sleeping Clark, a sleeping Clark smiling at what he thought was a dream Lois, and a very real and extremely furious Lois ripping the fixtures out of the walls and off the ceiling at the sight of Clark making out with Cat, whom he repeatedly insisted meant nothing to him. Clark has to watch out where he sleeps so he doesn't get attacked like that on a continual basis.
I'm sure glad I don't have problems like that.
Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around.
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Ouch! You are evil, you know that? Here you made me think that Lois was finally doing some much-needed advantage-taking, but look at what the Cat dragged in... herself, that is! Well, at least Clark was dreaming about the right female, and it was not the feline one! Which is honestly why he didn't resist the advances of Ms. Purrrrrrs. And, eh, now all he has to do is find a way to prove that last, eeny, weeny, tiny little point....  Ann
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Hehe  welcome back! 
If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it.
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Hi, You do have a very nasty streak, Erica. Poor Clark thought he was the cat that got the cream... only it was the wrong cat, and definitely the wrong cream.  Yours Jenni
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Aha! It wasn't until she decided to kiss him that I realized... 'wait... it's MDL, and she hasn't given us a name yet... something's sneaky here...' And then, a couple of lines later, BAM! Hehe! Very fun. Keep up the good work! AnnaBtG.
What we've got here is failure to communicate...
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I'm not sure I'd like to be in Clark's place Jose 
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Ooh, you are pure ~NICOLE
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Loved it though I have to admit that I thought that it was Lois sneaking in on Clark, too. 
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Loved it, Erica. And... *ahem*... totally knew it wasn't Lois. *cough*
'I just kind of died for you;
You just kind of stared at me'
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I really liked it alot. I have to admit that I had to go back and read the end again just to make sure I was understanding it. It was great my minds already thinking of sequel possibilities **hint hint**.
(i think there was a typo where wrote found i think yoou meant to write fond)
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 I am so that you've enjoyed the story. Although a little bit evil, it is from the heart I'll see you around guys. And thank you for the suggestions for a better (or worse in my point of view) ending, but I guess I will have to leave that for the great minds around. Ambar, thank you for the tip. I really really really appreciate when people try to help me with my English. For everybody else, a great hug and I see you soon. MDL - Who still thinks her ending is cooler than the one Nicole is suggesting.  <<<---- hey I like this new one :p
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Erica This is evil. I love it. I look forward to reading more of your vignettes. Tricia 
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