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FDK:East of the Garden-Part 13,14 #26142 12/02/05 03:27 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. OP Pulitzer
OP mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. Karen gave her CPR, Lois can still be revive. Quote "Daddy, no!" Emma's hand was yanked out of Walter's as she shot upward after her father, her flight tracked by Walter and Karen. Only Gracie's gaze remained fixed on her mother. Did Emma flight after her father? Quote All of this took place in much less time than a single eye-blink. So the single pair of eyes which witnessed the scene on the ground, only saw the woman's body jerk violently as the lightning struck it, and then lie still. OK, If all this electric term will bring Lois back to life. I'm in! More ASAP, please. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK:East of the Garden-Part 13,14 #26143 12/02/05 06:01 PM
Joined: Sep 2005 Posts: 76 Holladay, Utah S Snave Freelance Reporter
Snave Freelance Reporter S Joined: Sep 2005 Posts: 76 Holladay, Utah	Quote Why the girls can see thru rock and Superman can't? Because he has no reason to look below the ground. Notice how quickly he found them once he knew they were there? Quote Karen gave her CPR, Lois can still be revive. Ah, but wait until you read the complications in Chapter Fifteen... Quote Did Emma flight after her father? Yes; she was afraid that he was leaving them. Her mother had just died, and that would leave her with no one...

Re: FDK:East of the Garden-Part 13,14 #26144 02/09/06 05:08 AM
Joined: Sep 2005 Posts: 76 Holladay, Utah S Snave Freelance Reporter
Snave Freelance Reporter S Joined: Sep 2005 Posts: 76 Holladay, Utah	I know that this is really old news; but some comments by Terry Leatherwood and others have really bothered me about Chapter Thirteen of this story, so I felt that I had to do something (hopefully really short and economical) to fix it. I hope I succeeded in changing its tone (the change is in bold .) If you can't remember the story, here's the ToC entry for it. -- Snave

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