I've been working on a longer story for a while now, but it's finally taken off and I can see where the end is going to go. It's a very different style than I've done for L&C before, though, somewhat whimsical and more abstract then concrete -- though that's not to say there's no plot, because that's what's taken so long to figure out!
Anyway, I'd love to have two or three people read it and tell me if it works or not, is coherent or believable -- especially tell me if it's in character, because I'm a bit rusty with Lois and Clark (though it's easy to get back in their heads...I THINK). I do pretty fair on punctuation and grammar, so it's more of the feel and character tone that I want comments on.
I wish I could say what the premise of the story is, but it'd be a huge giveaway. Suffice it to say that it takes place after 'The Green, Green Glow Of Home,' but very AU from the show. The story focuses on significant repercussions from a choice one of the characters makes at the divergent end of that episode -- and the title is 'Newsworthy.' I have ten chapters completed with at least that many more to go.
If anyone's interested, you can PM me -- thanks so much!
