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Hi, Very interesting.  When this story is located in time? How many kids does Lois and Clark have? Jon tried to back away, but Tempus grabbed the edge of his red cape
and pulled him forward. "Did you know that in Utopian history books, they just say you
married very young? They don't really say why. All that is in the past or is going to change because of Jon? MAF 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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Looks very intriguing! I hope you'll keep working on it!
See ya,
AnnaBtG.
What we've got here is failure to communicate...
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Wow. Wow, Mary, just... wow. That was amazing and, as I mentioned, I want to see that sequel.  I absolutely love the idea... Tempus kidnapping Jon and taking him into the past... it's great. And... just plain great. Did I mention wanting to see more? Dave (willing to not-so-patiently wait)
'I just kind of died for you;
You just kind of stared at me'
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Mary A great idea!  Tricia 
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Argh! You can't leave us like this! You have to get him out of this mess!
Nan
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This is so not a stand-alone, so you'd better be writing the rest of it!
Maria, Jon is the Daddy Duck who will be killed; Jenny (his wife) is the widow or Mommy Duck who won't let their child (the baby duckling) become a superhero, while Lois & Clark are the Gammy and Gampy Ducks who fall into a depression at the death of their only child, Jon.
Now, I have some questions: how do the drugs keep working unless the nurse keeps exposing Jon to kryptonite? If that's the case, why isn't Clark acting like there's kryptonite around? I have questions; you have answers, and I really want to see them soon. Preferrably in the next part of this story!
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I'M AFRAID!!!!!!!!!!!
More please more!
I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.
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Do you know the most surprising thing about divorce? It doesn't actually kill you, like a bullet to the heart or a head-on car wreck. It should. When someone you've promised to cherish till death do you part says, "I never loved you," it should kill you instantly.
- Under the Tuscan Sun
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Um, hello  Anywho, um, I've been working on the rest. It's kinda plodding along---at the moment I'm frowning over characterization and rethinking what direction I want to take the plot. This is the part where I really need my muse, who at the moment, is being herself. (See A Musing for details on what that means). It's nice to see that y'all are so interested.  I'll try to deliver. Thank you for your patience!
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*waits, pati-- err, waits*
Do you know the most surprising thing about divorce? It doesn't actually kill you, like a bullet to the heart or a head-on car wreck. It should. When someone you've promised to cherish till death do you part says, "I never loved you," it should kill you instantly.
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