Hi,

Very interesting. When this story is located in time?

How many kids does Lois and Clark have?


All that is in the past or is going to change because of Jon?

MAF

Looks very intriguing! I hope you'll keep working on it!

See ya,
AnnaBtG.

Wow.

Wow, Mary, just... wow.

That was amazing and, as I mentioned, I want to see that sequel.

I absolutely love the idea... Tempus kidnapping Jon and taking him into the past... it's great. And... just plain great. Did I mention wanting to see more?

Dave (willing to not-so-patiently wait)

Mary, you have better give us a sequal soon or else...

James

Mary

A great idea!

Tricia

Argh! You can't leave us like this! You have to get him out of this mess!

Nan

This is so not a stand-alone, so you'd better be writing the rest of it!

Maria, Jon is the Daddy Duck who will be killed; Jenny (his wife) is the widow or Mommy Duck who won't let their child (the baby duckling) become a superhero, while Lois & Clark are the Gammy and Gampy Ducks who fall into a depression at the death of their only child, Jon.

Now, I have some questions: how do the drugs keep working unless the nurse keeps exposing Jon to kryptonite? If that's the case, why isn't Clark acting like there's kryptonite around? I have questions; you have answers, and I really want to see them soon. Preferrably in the next part of this story!

I'M AFRAID!!!!!!!!!!!

More please more!

What sheilah said! "Tease" is not even the word. :p

Post more, or we will be forced to hunt you down.

And no one wants that, right?

Um, hello
Anywho, um, I've been working on the rest. It's kinda plodding along---at the moment I'm frowning over characterization and rethinking what direction I want to take the plot. This is the part where I really need my muse, who at the moment, is being herself. (See A Musing for details on what that means).

It's nice to see that y'all are so interested.
I'll try to deliver.
Thank you for your patience!

*waits, pati-- err, waits*