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Well, the thought that "What if Clark had been affected in Pheremone my lovely, and Lois wasn't," occurred to me, and this is what came out.
Let me know what you think!
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That was absolutely hilarious.  My favourite line *had* to be: Clark hesitated for a moment, then shrugged. Thatta boy! 
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You just kind of stared at me'
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A new Shayne vignette!  And a cute one, too. Plus a little hint of WAFFs at the end there. <happy sigh> Lovely, Shayne.  LabRat 
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Shayne A great vignette! I thoroughly enjoyed it. Tricia 
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too cute!!! James
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Cu- Damn. Almost forgot myself for a minute.
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No angst! No mix ups! No Jimmy!
Still makes for a good little story where they all live happily ever after.
Cute, Shayne.
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Cute! You had me worried there for a moment when Clark realized there was a woman in bed with him - it just had to be Lois! And it was. Thank you. Now - knowing Clark, he's going to tell Lois about Miranda, the drug, etc... eventually. Then he'll have to convince Lois of the whole 'which came first, the chicken or the egg' thing - that she came first, then the drug.  But in the meantime, he's going with the flow. Attaboy, Clark! ~Toc
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Always nice to see a Shayne vignette. But.... It was his grandmother’s ring, the one Martha had been saving for his first marriage.  So.... is this Clark a serial monogamist or a polygamist or...? And Gerry said there was no angst in this story! Am guessing from Lois's affectionate reaction he hasn't told her this is just his "starter" marriage. c.
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Lois would be his "first" in more ways than one.
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LOL Shayne! Very cute idea. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
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That was... inspiredly twisted.
And... HA!
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Very lovely, light and funny.
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lol, good one.
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That was absolutely hilarious.
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Thatta boy! I agree! I was shocked when Lois said Clark and not Superman. Then I smiled Great stuff!
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Oh, and PS <g>: Don't forget to send this along to the Archive, Shayne, if you're so inclined. You can use our handy new submissions form . Trust me, it's worth submitting a story just for the experience of that alone. And don't forget to send it along to Annesplace, too! She likes new stories as much as we do.  LabRat Editor-in-Chief The Lois and Clark Fanfic Archive
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