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Posted By: ShayneT Feedback:Gift Horses - 10/06/05 12:12 AM
Well, the thought that "What if Clark had been affected in Pheremone my lovely, and Lois wasn't," occurred to me, and this is what came out.

Let me know what you think!
Posted By: mariadferdez. Re: Feedback:Gift Horses - 10/06/05 12:24 AM
Hi,

Interesting!

MAF
Posted By: Dave Re: Feedback:Gift Horses - 10/06/05 05:03 AM
That was absolutely hilarious. laugh

My favourite line *had* to be:

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Clark hesitated for a moment, then shrugged.
Thatta boy! rotflol
Posted By: LabRat Re: Feedback:Gift Horses - 10/06/05 06:31 AM
A new Shayne vignette! smile1

And a cute one, too. Plus a little hint of WAFFs at the end there. <happy sigh> Lovely, Shayne. thumbsup

LabRat smile
Posted By: TriciaW Re: Feedback:Gift Horses - 10/06/05 08:39 AM
Shayne

A great vignette! smile1 I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Tricia cool
Posted By: Mister Data Re: Feedback:Gift Horses - 10/06/05 09:50 AM
too cute!!! thumbsup

James
Posted By: SJH Re: Feedback:Gift Horses - 10/06/05 10:09 AM
Cu- Damn. Almost forgot myself for a minute.
Posted By: gerry Re: Feedback:Gift Horses - 10/06/05 10:24 AM
No angst! No mix ups! No Jimmy!

Still makes for a good little story where they all live happily ever after.

Cute, Shayne.

gerry
Posted By: TicAndToc Re: Feedback:Gift Horses - 10/06/05 11:04 AM
Cute! You had me worried there for a moment when Clark realized there was a woman in bed with him - it just had to be Lois! And it was. Thank you.

Now - knowing Clark, he's going to tell Lois about Miranda, the drug, etc... eventually. Then he'll have to convince Lois of the whole 'which came first, the chicken or the egg' thing - that she came first, then the drug. goofy

But in the meantime, he's going with the flow. Attaboy, Clark!

~Toc
Posted By: ccmalo Re: Feedback:Gift Horses - 10/06/05 02:28 PM
Always nice to see a Shayne vignette. smile

But....
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It was his grandmother’s ring, the one Martha had been saving for his first marriage.
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So.... is this Clark a serial monogamist or a polygamist or...?
And Gerry said there was no angst in this story! Am guessing from Lois's affectionate reaction he hasn't told her this is just his "starter" marriage. laugh

c.
Posted By: SJH Re: Feedback:Gift Horses - 10/06/05 05:17 PM
Lois would be his "first" in more ways than one.
Posted By: Laurach Re: Feedback:Gift Horses - 10/06/05 11:52 PM
LOL Shayne! Very cute idea. Laura
Posted By: Anna B. the Greek Re: Feedback:Gift Horses - 10/07/05 10:58 AM
That was... inspiredly twisted.

And... HA!

See ya,
AnnaBtG.
Posted By: Ank. K. S. Re: Feedback:Gift Horses - 10/07/05 11:24 PM
laugh
Very lovely, light and funny.
Posted By: Fearless Monkey Re: Feedback:Gift Horses - 10/08/05 06:50 AM
lol, good one.
smile
Posted By: SuperRoo Re: Feedback:Gift Horses - 10/08/05 09:00 PM
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That was absolutely hilarious.

My favourite line *had* to be:


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Clark hesitated for a moment, then shrugged.
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Thatta boy!
I agree!

I was shocked when Lois said Clark and not Superman. Then I smiled smile

Great stuff!
Posted By: LabRat Re: Feedback:Gift Horses - 10/17/05 03:52 PM
Oh, and PS <g>: Don't forget to send this along to the Archive, Shayne, if you're so inclined. You can use our handy new submissions form . Trust me, it's worth submitting a story just for the experience of that alone. goofy

And don't forget to send it along to Annesplace, too! She likes new stories as much as we do. wink

LabRat smile
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