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Changed my mind and went ahead and posted. The last chapter will go up sometime next week. Rotten veggies, rancid fruit, slimy carrots, and squishy tomatoes go here.
BrightFeather
“Rules only make sense if they are both kept and broken. Breaking the rule is one way of observing it.”
--Thomas Moore
"Keep an open mind, I always say. Drives sensible people mad, I know, but what did we ever get from sensible people? Not poetry or art or music, that's for sure."
--Charles de Lint, Someplace to Be Flying
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Hack from Nowheresville
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What`s wrong with this child!! Going around murdering other children??!! Her mind must be really twisted.
I am glad Rachel finally found the courage to go and tell Lois and Clark all about her terrible past.
Waiting for the next part soon.
sunshine (who`s still hoping there will be a happing ending including little Timmy<hint,hint,hing> )
A friend is somebody that knows everything about you and still likes you
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Pulitzer
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Hi, Great part.  Wow! She finally open up and told everything.
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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Top Banana
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Another great part!  You are doing a wonderful work picturing Rachel' pain, poor baby! Looking for the next part simona 
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Happy to see Rachel finally telling Clark what she saw. Now they can get this sick little girl some serious help. Great part!
Jackie
Superman: I hear you've been looking for me.
Lois: All my life.
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Wow. Thanks, Maria, Simona, Sunshine, and Jackie! The final part goes up on Monday. I've been informed that our murderer is chilling, so be warned. <g> Thanks for sticking with this.
Laura
“Rules only make sense if they are both kept and broken. Breaking the rule is one way of observing it.”
--Thomas Moore
"Keep an open mind, I always say. Drives sensible people mad, I know, but what did we ever get from sensible people? Not poetry or art or music, that's for sure."
--Charles de Lint, Someplace to Be Flying
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Sorry I'm late posting. I fell behind in my reading big time. I'm lovin' it so far. She threw her little arms around his neck and kissed him on the cheek. "I wanna marry you when I grow up," she said solemnly. "That way, I can fly forever."
Clark laughed and tickled her tummy. "Sprite, I'm already married to your Momma."
She considered this for a minute. "Then I wanna marry somebody who can fly like you," she whispered in his ear.
Clark settled Rachel on his hip. "I'm afraid that won't work, either," he said solemnly. "The only other people here who might be able to fly someday are going to be any brothers and sisters that your Mommy and I make."
"No fair," Rachel pouted. "Guess I won't get married then, because boys that can't fly are dumb." 
I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.
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