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FDK - Made to Be Broken 13/18 REPOST #21862 05/14/05 02:54 PM
Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 78 Toronto Allie OP Freelance Reporter
OP Allie Freelance Reporter Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 78 Toronto	Wow ! Great section. I think your changes are terrific. The relationship between L and C moves to a new place.. but it all fits. Can't wait for more ! Allie

Re: FDK - Made to Be Broken 13/18 REPOST #21863 05/14/05 04:47 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ Supes1fan Top Banana
Supes1fan Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ	I didn't read it the first time so this is all new to me and WOW. Great stuff..I am so happy that they are finally moving on. This whole part was just what we needed. I like the small Martha part, seeing that they are healing from her point of view. And the last part in the car..ohhhh! sob ~Liz Lois: Can I go? Clark: No. Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go. Clark: Then why do you ask? Lois: I’m trying to be nice.

Re: FDK - Made to Be Broken 13/18 REPOST #21864 05/15/05 11:29 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL Shadow Pulitzer
Shadow Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL	Nice, I liked the added Martha part. JD "Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy

Re: FDK - Made to Be Broken 13/18 REPOST #21865 05/16/05 04:18 AM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 1,047 where the 7 hills and 3 rivers... CC Aiken Top Banana
CC Aiken Top Banana Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 1,047 where the 7 hills and 3 rivers...	I read both versions, Sara. And while I found the original part 13 to be completely satisfying and wonderfully done, I do like this one better. Filtering their tentative first steps towards each other through Martha's eyes was just brilliant. This continues to be heart-wrenching and lovely. CC You mean we're supposed to have lives? Oh crap! ~Tank

Re: FDK - Made to Be Broken 13/18 REPOST #21866 05/19/05 04:32 AM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 385 Philomena's Milking Parlour, T... Sorcha Beat Reporter
Sorcha Beat Reporter Joined: May 2003 Posts: 385 Philomena's Milking Parlour, T...	Hey, guys Sara Death: Easy, Bill. You'll give yourself a heart attack and ruin my vacation. Meet Joe Black

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