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Another long-day-at-work-inspired-vignette. Hope you likes 
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Hi Of Course I like It  I love your fics and you know that  Go For It Lois!!! and that evil Lex  Karla
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Very nice! 
Superman: I hear you've been looking for me.
Lois: All my life.
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Ooh, I love it! Lex showing his true colors and Lois seeing him for what he is... and I agree, kissing Clark was the best way to show him up. Actually, for Lois, kissing Clark is the best way to deal with any number of situations  Anyway, this was really really nice. PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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Well I just love Lois's reaction here. Good kiss! Good job. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Ooooh! Very nice, Nicole!! Loved it! Kaethel
- I'm your partner. I'm your friend.
- Is that what we are?
- Oh, you know what? I don't know what we are. We kiss and then we never talk about it. We nearly die frozen in each other's arms, but we never talk about it, so no, I got no clue what we are.
~ Rick Castle and Kate Beckett ~ Knockout ~
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Naaawww... Talk about taking revenge. 
"How many times must I tell you? Queens consume nectars and ambrosia, not hot dogs."
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Great little story, Nicole!
The first two paragraphs were ROFLy. The ending was fabulous. And the rest was WOW!
Thank you for this lovely story! Keep it up!
See ya,
AnnaBtG.
What we've got here is failure to communicate...
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Poor Lex...
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Poor Lex... Jose 
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Woohoo! Go, Lois! Loved it, Nicole. Thanks for sharing. I just love the tag line. And, of course, the kiss to make a point which becomes...something more. <waffy sigh> Terrific! Oh, and love the title too. Cute! LabRat (who loves authors who post these little vignettes she has time to read... )
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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Oh wow. Oh wow oh wow oh wow. Boy, am I glad I decided to check out this story. <g> Nicole, this was great! Perfect bite-sized vingette. You set up so much in such a small amount of time -- understated, yet I could hear it and see it as if it were on screen right in front of me. Great dialogue, great idea, great way for Lex to get what's coming. And, you know, if you just happened to have in mind what happens next, I wouldn't be opposed ... Kathy (who can just picture Lex's head exploding, LOL)
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What would Lois & Clark be without her temper? That's a nice glimpse of a different world in the late season 1, a joy to read!
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Hey all Thank you so much for the responses! I love writing these little stories, I find them challenging and fun. Glad you guys seem to enjoy them too  ~Nicole 
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LOL! That was great, Nicole. 
Lois: Well, I like my quirks. I think they make me unique.
Clark: You certainly are unique.
Clark: You're high maintenance, you know that?
Lois: But I'm worth it!
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Nicole This is wonderful. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Tricia 
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