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Posted By: Nicole S FDK: Regarding Paris - 04/29/05 04:43 PM
Another long-day-at-work-inspired-vignette. Hope you likes wink
Posted By: Karla Kent Re: FDK: Regarding Paris - 04/29/05 05:44 PM
Hi

Of Course I like It clap

I love your fics and you know that laugh

Go For It Lois!!! wink and that evil Lex dance

Karla
Posted By: jackiek Re: FDK: Regarding Paris - 04/29/05 05:56 PM
Very nice! smile
Posted By: ChiefPam Re: FDK: Regarding Paris - 04/29/05 06:06 PM
Ooh, I love it! Lex showing his true colors and Lois seeing him for what he is... and I agree, kissing Clark was the best way to show him up. Actually, for Lois, kissing Clark is the best way to deal with any number of situations goofy

Anyway, this was really really nice. smile

PJ
Posted By: Laurach Re: FDK: Regarding Paris - 04/29/05 08:34 PM
Well I just love Lois's reaction here. Good kiss! Good job. Laura
Posted By: Kaethel Re: FDK: Regarding Paris - 04/29/05 11:25 PM
Ooooh! Very nice, Nicole!! Loved it! smile

Kaethel smile
Posted By: Cherry Re: FDK: Regarding Paris - 04/29/05 11:47 PM
Naaawww... Talk about taking revenge. razz
Posted By: Anna B. the Greek Re: FDK: Regarding Paris - 04/30/05 05:05 AM
Great little story, Nicole!

The first two paragraphs were ROFLy. The ending was fabulous. And the rest was WOW!

Thank you for this lovely story! Keep it up!
See ya,
AnnaBtG.
Posted By: daneel Re: FDK: Regarding Paris - 04/30/05 05:37 AM
Poor Lex... goofy
Posted By: daneel Re: FDK: Regarding Paris - 04/30/05 05:38 AM
Poor Lex... goofy

Jose hyper
Posted By: LabRat Re: FDK: Regarding Paris - 04/30/05 06:43 AM
Woohoo! Go, Lois! clap clap

Loved it, Nicole. Thanks for sharing. I just love the tag line. And, of course, the kiss to make a point which becomes...something more. <waffy sigh>

Terrific!

Oh, and love the title too. Cute!

LabRat (who loves authors who post these little vignettes she has time to read... laugh )
Posted By: KathyB Re: FDK: Regarding Paris - 04/30/05 08:08 AM
Oh wow. Oh wow oh wow oh wow. Boy, am I glad I decided to check out this story. <g>

Nicole, this was great! Perfect bite-sized vingette. You set up so much in such a small amount of time -- understated, yet I could hear it and see it as if it were on screen right in front of me.

Great dialogue, great idea, great way for Lex to get what's coming. And, you know, if you just happened to have in mind what happens next, I wouldn't be opposed ... smile

Kathy (who can just picture Lex's head exploding, LOL)
Posted By: Bettina Baumann Re: FDK: Regarding Paris - 04/30/05 10:08 AM
What would Lois & Clark be without her temper? laugh That's a nice glimpse of a different world in the late season 1, a joy to read!
Posted By: Nicole S Re: FDK: Regarding Paris - 04/30/05 05:06 PM
Hey all smile

Thank you so much for the responses! I love writing these little stories, I find them challenging and fun. Glad you guys seem to enjoy them too blush

~Nicole smile1
Posted By: Xanabee Re: FDK: Regarding Paris - 05/08/05 03:51 AM
LOL! laugh

That was great, Nicole. thumbsup
Posted By: TriciaW Re: FDK: Regarding Paris - 05/12/05 02:16 AM
Nicole

This is wonderful. smile1 I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Tricia cool
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