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And so... the end is near... <g> I bet a lot of you will be relieved when this one is finished, right?  I'd appreciate it if you'd tell me what you think of these new developments. Thanks!
Lois: Well, I like my quirks. I think they make me unique.
Clark: You certainly are unique.
Clark: You're high maintenance, you know that?
Lois: But I'm worth it!
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Hi, Great part.  “Vanity,” Lois said suddenly. Excited, she unceremoniously dumped the coffeepot on the table and turned to face the men.
“Vanity? What do you mean?” Perry was already enjoying his pancakes.  I want to know! Get back to write. More soon, please. MAF
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Ursie, Very nice! I loved the description of the Kryptonite's effect on Lois. Now, how will they trap Mindy? I can't wait for part 24! - Alicia 
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Maria, great to see you laughing at the 'pancakes' remark. When I reread this part a few times before posting it I thought it was a bit grim so at the last moment I decided to include something to smile about. I'm glad it worked! Alicia, did you like the description or the effects of the Kryptonite on Lois? Just kidding! Just kidding!!  I'm nearing the end of the tunnel. Heheheh. How about you - are you taking a break from writing or have you started already on your prequel on Dr. Lois and Dr. Clark? 
Lois: Well, I like my quirks. I think they make me unique.
Clark: You certainly are unique.
Clark: You're high maintenance, you know that?
Lois: But I'm worth it!
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Ursula WOW! An excellent part! I can't wait to see what Lois's idea is. I'm hoping that Gareth will remain friends with Lois and Clark. Tricia 
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Ursie - hurry! <G> I'm reading the comments here and getting mighty intrigued. But I'm too far behind to start catching up now. Send it along to the Archive soon? LabRat 
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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Ursie,
great part
I felt sorry for Lois when Gareth was lambasting her.
too bad she can't tell him how she knows about the Kryptonite
more soon please
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Nothing is overlooked and you are doing a wonderful jog bringing everything together. Not an easy task with so many characters and so many things happening. Tricia, when this story gets to the Archive it will be billed the most confusing L&C fanfic ever! You're right, I'll have to go easy on new, supporting characters in future - that is, if I ever get down to writing again. Phew! This is an exhausting hobby. But so very good for my English! 
Lois: Well, I like my quirks. I think they make me unique.
Clark: You certainly are unique.
Clark: You're high maintenance, you know that?
Lois: But I'm worth it!
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back to writing now! I have a chapter to finish. Yeah, lock Mindy in a cell and throw the key  Jose (who, since this is getting to the end, is wondering about Ursie's next story Any comment?)
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wondering about Ursie's next story. Any comment? Naah!! It's germinating, Jose, it's germinating! The only thing I know for sure is that it will be a continuation of this L&C family. I have become rather attached to them!
Lois: Well, I like my quirks. I think they make me unique.
Clark: You certainly are unique.
Clark: You're high maintenance, you know that?
Lois: But I'm worth it!
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Oh! A Next Gen story But I thought you were going to explore that weird idea I had long time ago.
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No, not a Next-Gen story yet, Jose! I'm not going to skip years and years and years... About your story idea: give me time to recover from this one, please! <g> before I'll even consider it! I'll need a summer break first, go on vacation and just go out the door to soak up some sun.
Lois: Well, I like my quirks. I think they make me unique.
Clark: You certainly are unique.
Clark: You're high maintenance, you know that?
Lois: But I'm worth it!
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give me time to recover from this one, please! Sorry  before I'll even consider it! I'll need a summer break first, go on vacation and just go out the door to soak up some sun. [Smiley] Come to Spain, there's plenty :p . Maybe too much. We're in May! Knowing the weather here where I live probably we won't see the sun in summer :rolleyes: Jose
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As a matter of fact, Jose, I'll be in Barcelona in August to help my brother and his wife celebrate their 25th wedding anniversary.
Lois: Well, I like my quirks. I think they make me unique.
Clark: You certainly are unique.
Clark: You're high maintenance, you know that?
Lois: But I'm worth it!
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