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Hi, Cute story.  That woman is sick. :rolleyes: Yet again, Lois somehow managed to go from holding his hand to snuggled up against him with her arm around his neck in the fraction of a second it took him to clear the creature's teeth. <How does she do it? Not that I'm really complaining, mind, but it's just not the appropriate time!>
He set her down firmly on the ground, instructing, "And this time, stay put!"
"Yes, m'lord," Lois replied facetiously. Then she thought better of it, and added, "And thanks." Looking up, she gasped as she saw the long serpentine neck craning to bring jaws down on the pair of them. 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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hi  That was funny....Lu sees the humans and thinks that are bugs...LOL Nice story....I like your stories Karla
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Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Personally, I'm fond of Ellen, who will never overstock toilet paper again... This was hilarious. I can just see Superman doing a "hop, skip & jump" across rooftops...  And I see Clark has sworn off changing in phone booths... probably a wise choice. And obviously Cat appreciates it! Also, I forgot to say earlier... I *love* your disclaimer <g> PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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Another very funny rewrite! For me, the most hilarious was Clark's silhouette as he changed in the DP closet, with Perry's remark, Cat's leer and then the way everyone studiously looked the other way as he emerged. Hilarious! I see in your profile that you made it here via the Archive, so I hope that these stories are making their way back to the Archive, right?  Wendy 
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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 I thoroughly enjoyed it. I hope you take Wendy's advice and send your stories to the archive. Tricia 
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Already sent.... The little convinced me -- I don't want him showing up during the family Christmas dinner!  Thanks for the kind comments.
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