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FDK - The Third World of CJL - Part Five #17217 11/13/04 03:41 AM
Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,269 Connecticut ChaaBreh OP Top Banana
OP ChaaBreh Top Banana Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,269 Connecticut	Ok, I feel like I'm finally heading toward the juicier parts of this story.... Comments/feedback always appreciated! Chris "Together we are stronger than each of us is apart"

Re: FDK - The Third World of CJL - Part Five #17218 11/13/04 11:43 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. She is brilliant at her age. Quote Clark landed just outside of Smallville in a deserted field. "Son? Why are we here?" Martha asked, trying to get a grip on her bearings again. "Mom, I need a way to come and go from the farmhouse without people spotting me – especially now that I've blown it. I have an idea. I'll dig an underground tunnel from here to the storm shed. That way, you don't have to worry about Trask or any of his goons spotting me. Wait here, Mom. Stand back a bit so you don't get hit by any flying debris. It'll just take me a few minutes to do this, using my X-ray vision. Don't want to hit any underground pipes or anything, so it'll have to be fairly deep." That is a good idea. What is Trask man find the tunnel? More ASAP, please. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK - The Third World of CJL - Part Five #17219 11/27/04 11:40 AM
Joined: Sep 2003 Posts: 30 Kiowa, Colorado Ultrawoman Blogger
Ultrawoman Blogger Joined: Sep 2003 Posts: 30 Kiowa, Colorado	Chris - this is a great story. There is a lot of new stuff - green & red rocks found early - that hasn't happened in other LnC stories. Clark is really setting himself up for trouble in the early years. No matter what frame of mind Trask is in - HE'S STILL TROUBLE!!!! Looking forward to the promised connections to Concrete Jungle. Can't wait for more.

Re: FDK - The Third World of CJL - Part Five #17220 11/29/04 11:20 AM
Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,269 Connecticut ChaaBreh OP Top Banana
OP ChaaBreh Top Banana Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,269 Connecticut	Thanks, I promise a new chapter of the Third World sometime this week! Chris "Together we are stronger than each of us is apart"

Re: FDK - The Third World of CJL - Part Five #17221 12/07/04 01:48 PM
Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,269 Connecticut ChaaBreh OP Top Banana
OP ChaaBreh Top Banana Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,269 Connecticut	OK, well I obviously lied in my last post. Those that are faithfully following this story, and Concrete Jungle Love, thanks for bearing with me on this excruciatingly slow posting schedule. Chapter 6 is up! Chris "Together we are stronger than each of us is apart"

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