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Like I said in the subject line ...YAY!!!

I loved both parts, very good wrap on their public announcement with Cat.

Scary moment on the street there with the rollerblader, but I loved this part...

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“Good… then… we can all… you know… disperse,” she said, speaking to the crowd around them. “Come on… disperse… there’s a good crowd.”
VERY FUNNY!!!! Awesome cute, cool. thumbsup Good solution for Lois to regain her cool. Loved this. There was actually tons of stuff in here that I loved and want to talk about, but I'm gonna post this now for the herd of feedback to come. You've made us soooo happy Leela!!! clap

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Backatcha with the big happy, Teej -

You know, the whole pizza/plastic story? I did that once as a teenager. I was following directions and it didn't say to take the plastic off. I'm embarrassed to say that this was pre-microwave ovens, so I can't even use that as an excuse - how I just got confused.

Of course, I tossed the pizza when my brother looked at it and told me it was now poisoned.


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Bravo Lois!! You go girl, hasn't our little girl come a long way?? Did you cry after this part Leela?

You are doing an awesome job honestly..totally wonderful parts and YAY Lois took comfort from Clark at the end there..BIG step!

~Liz

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Of course, I tossed the pizza when my brother looked at it and told me it was now poisoned.
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Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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Hi,

Great parts. drool


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“Are you afraid of my cooking?”

“Lois. Your cooking is legendary… I heard some really – interesting stories from Perry and Alice.”

“You know – if you’re supposed to take the pizzas out of the plastic wrap before cooking them – they should specify that in the instructions.”

“But - plastic… in the oven….”

“Yeah, but you can put it in the microwave, and it doesn’t melt there.”

“I know – but – “

“I thought it was special plastic – you know – space-age and all that – don’t laugh at me!”
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Your Sleeping Beauty Muse is wide-awake, isn't it? YAY!!!!
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Loved Clark-Lois-Cat interview and Lois-Lana conversation; and Lois, I'm very proud of your reaction after your panic-attack!

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Oh, this is really really good... loved the line about the crowd dispersing <g>

want more, want more...

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He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."

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Wow--- 4 parts in 3 days! you are totally spoiling us, Leela!

I could so feel for Lois as she tried to compose herself during her panic attack....

Then like everyone else, I smiled when I watched her turn into *our* Lois, telling the crowd to buzz off!

And I like Cat and Lana (two things you generally can't say in fanfiction very often!)

MORE MORE MORE (like the old disco song!)


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WOW, a fantastic part! smile1

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Wow a lot of things in this part! smile

I even thought you had brought Lord Kal smile1


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