FDK-->LST 72 & 73 YAY!!!!!! - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Like I said in the subject line ...YAY!!!

I loved both parts, very good wrap on their public announcement with Cat.

Scary moment on the street there with the rollerblader, but I loved this part...

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“Good… then… we can all… you know… disperse,” she said, speaking to the crowd around them. “Come on… disperse… there’s a good crowd.”

VERY FUNNY!!!! Awesome cute, cool.

Good solution for Lois to regain her cool. Loved this. There was actually tons of stuff in here that I loved and want to talk about, but I'm gonna post this now for the herd of feedback to come. You've made us soooo happy Leela!!!

TEEEEEEEEEEJ

Backatcha with the big happy, Teej -

You know, the whole pizza/plastic story? I did that once as a teenager. I was following directions and it didn't say to take the plastic off. I'm embarrassed to say that this was pre-microwave ovens, so I can't even use that as an excuse - how I just got confused.

Of course, I tossed the pizza when my brother looked at it and told me it was now poisoned.

Bravo Lois!! You go girl, hasn't our little girl come a long way?? Did you cry after this part Leela?

You are doing an awesome job honestly..totally wonderful parts and YAY Lois took comfort from Clark at the end there..BIG step!

~Liz

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Of course, I tossed the pizza when my brother looked at it and told me it was now poisoned.

Hi,

Great parts.

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“Are you afraid of my cooking?”

“Lois. Your cooking is legendary… I heard some really – interesting stories from Perry and Alice.”

“You know – if you’re supposed to take the pizzas out of the plastic wrap before cooking them – they should specify that in the instructions.”

“But - plastic… in the oven….”

“Yeah, but you can put it in the microwave, and it doesn’t melt there.”

“I know – but – “

“I thought it was special plastic – you know – space-age and all that – don’t laugh at me!”

Your Sleeping Beauty Muse is wide-awake, isn't it? YAY!!!!

Loved Clark-Lois-Cat interview and Lois-Lana conversation; and Lois, I'm very proud of your reaction after your panic-attack!

Simona

Oh, this is really really good... loved the line about the crowd dispersing <g>

want more, want more...

PJ

Wow--- 4 parts in 3 days! you are totally spoiling us, Leela!

I could so feel for Lois as she tried to compose herself during her panic attack....

Then like everyone else, I smiled when I watched her turn into *our* Lois, telling the crowd to buzz off!

And I like Cat and Lana (two things you generally can't say in fanfiction very often!)

MORE MORE MORE (like the old disco song!)

Leela

WOW, a fantastic part!

Tricia

Wow a lot of things in this part!

I even thought you had brought Lord Kal