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FDK-My Other Secret Identity (2/2) #15681 09/15/04 07:37 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel OP Kerth
OP daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Nice wrapping Jose "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK-My Other Secret Identity (2/2) #15682 09/16/04 02:47 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ Supes1fan Top Banana
Supes1fan Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ	Niiiiiiiiiiiice.. Very sweet ending and I love it when Lois doesn't freak out! ~Liz Lois: Can I go? Clark: No. Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go. Clark: Then why do you ask? Lois: I’m trying to be nice.

Re: FDK-My Other Secret Identity (2/2) #15683 09/16/04 03:51 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA ChiefPam Pulitzer
ChiefPam Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA	Beautiful... <sigh> You did a good job skipping ahead to the real moment of confrontation -- we know what happened after she left the ball, but we don't have to slog through irrelevant details -- and Clark's fears were certainly understandable. I'm glad he went anyway, though -- and I know he is, too <g> Wonderful conversation between them, too. Tender and suspenseful and winding up to be really sweet and satisfying. And I'd never thought of that "lighting makes them look bigger" as a clue, or a hint, but "bigger" implies a comparison with a previous view... Cool Thanks, Cindy! You should write more of these shorter things! PJ "You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed. He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement." "You can say that again," she told him. "I have a...." "Oh, shut up." --Stardust, Caroline K

Re: FDK-My Other Secret Identity (2/2) #15684 09/16/04 10:55 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 652 MN E EmilyH Columnist
EmilyH Columnist E Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 652 MN	Great ending! I loved this. I believe there's a hero in all of us that keeps us honest, gives us strength, makes us noble, and finally allows us to die with pride, even though sometimes we have to be steady and give up the thing we want the most. Even our dreams. -- Aunt May, Spider-Man 2

Re: FDK-My Other Secret Identity (2/2) #15685 09/16/04 02:00 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Loved it<g>. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK-My Other Secret Identity (2/2) #15686 09/19/04 09:55 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 941 sunny California KathyM Features Writer
KathyM Features Writer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 941 sunny California	A wonderful story. Very nice revelation, and I loved the regretful glance that Clark shot her just before he had to reveal the truth to her. And this... Quote It was strange, but Lois had never doubted that it was Clark under that mask. After years of coming through her window disguised only with a little misdirection and some gaudy spandex, she was able to see the real Clark through a much heavier disguise. I wonder, if this story had taken place a year or even just 6 months earlier, whether Lois would have automatically have recognized him as Clark. And just call me galactically stupid, but as I read it it didn't even dawn on me that of course Clark wouldn't have been wearing his glasses, even though I had a perfectly excellent mental picture of him in the whole Zorro outfit. Very very nice. Thanks for posting it. Kathy "Our thoughts form the universe. They always matter." - Babylon 5

Re: FDK-My Other Secret Identity (2/2) #15687 09/19/04 06:07 PM
Joined: Oct 2003 Posts: 73 USA Ann Nonymous Freelance Reporter
Ann Nonymous Freelance Reporter Joined: Oct 2003 Posts: 73 USA	Thanks everyone for the story comments. I really enjoyed writing it and sharing it with you. AnnN. To thine own self be true.

Re: FDK-My Other Secret Identity (2/2) #15688 09/21/04 11:34 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Cute. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

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