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Hi, Beautiful and funny story.  MAF 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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lol, I love the punchline  I could practically hear the argument, so *I* was grateful for the silence :p You caught the Lane family dynamics very nicely. Thank goodness they've all gone!  PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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Oh, boy  Keep writing! AnnaBtG. 
What we've got here is failure to communicate...
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"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Gee, and I thought my family was a mess...  Great story!  ~Julia 
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Hah, me too, Julia. Great story. JD
"Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy
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Ditto to what Pam said. I could actually hear the arguement. You did a great job! A sudden shout put order in the conversation. The four of them looked at each other and then looked at the screamer. Clark was drained. He cupped his ears with both hands and tried not to listen to anything they were saying after that. He went to the kitchen and didn´t return.
“You see what you have done, Sam?” So like the Lane family, they have to fight about who started the fight. Sara
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Wow. That was really neat! Keep writing. I love the title and the way you ended it.
I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.
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FoLCs, 
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MDL An excellent portrayal of the Lane family!  Tricia 
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