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Posted By: mariadferdez. FDK: A MisLaned Family - 08/06/04 09:41 PM
Hi,

Beautiful and funny story. mecry

MAF rotflol
Posted By: ChiefPam Re: FDK: A MisLaned Family - 08/07/04 06:06 AM
lol, I love the punchline laugh I could practically hear the argument, so *I* was grateful for the silence :p You caught the Lane family dynamics very nicely.

Thank goodness they've all gone! goofy

PJ
Posted By: Anna B. the Greek Re: FDK: A MisLaned Family - 08/07/04 06:11 AM
Oh, boy lol

Keep writing!
AnnaBtG. smile
Posted By: daneel Re: FDK: A MisLaned Family - 08/07/04 06:33 AM
dizzy

Jose laugh
Posted By: Julia Re: FDK: A MisLaned Family - 08/07/04 07:23 AM
Gee, and I thought my family was a mess... wink

Great story! thumbsup

~Julia wave
Posted By: Shadow Re: FDK: A MisLaned Family - 08/07/04 11:57 AM
Hah, me too, Julia.

dizzy

Great story.

JD
Posted By: KSaraSara Re: FDK: A MisLaned Family - 08/07/04 12:54 PM
Ditto to what Pam said. I could actually hear the arguement. You did a great job! thumbsup

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A sudden shout put order in the conversation. The four of them looked at each other and then looked at the screamer. Clark was drained. He cupped his ears with both hands and tried not to listen to anything they were saying after that. He went to the kitchen and didn´t return.

“You see what you have done, Sam?”
So like the Lane family, they have to fight about who started the fight. lol

Sara
Posted By: SuperRoo Re: FDK: A MisLaned Family - 08/07/04 08:56 PM
Wow. That was really neat! Keep writing. I love the title and the way you ended it.
Posted By: Mad Dog Lane Re: FDK: A MisLaned Family - 08/08/04 12:46 AM
FoLCs, dance
Posted By: TriciaW Re: FDK: A MisLaned Family - 08/10/04 02:20 AM
MDL

An excellent portrayal of the Lane family! smile1

Tricia cool
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