A good beginning for a possibly excellant story. Wait, what am I saying. If Nan is writing this, then it has to be excellant.
I think you missed out on an excellant opportunity here for Lois to cut her hair so she could sneak away from all the reporters in disguise. I suppose it could still work. It would make sense that Lois would want to make a statement distancing herself from the woman who was fooled so badly by that scumbag Luthor.
Since you are the queen of A plots, I have no fear that you will be able to come up with some kickin' A plot to wrap this little growing relationship around.
Twins is the first priority, but this is a definte go.
Tank (who thinks that Nan needs to find a way let Lois use her new found riches as part of the story)
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Keep posting!
