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FDK-Even Steel Melts - part 1 #13951 07/19/04 07:15 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel OP Kerth
OP daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Interesting premise so far Wonder who is this Stella Jose "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK-Even Steel Melts - part 1 #13952 07/20/04 07:43 AM
Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 845 Rio de Janeiro - Brazil Mad Dog Lane Features Writer
Mad Dog Lane Features Writer Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 845 Rio de Janeiro - Brazil	Gee, had to re-write again. Thumbs down is not what I want for my first story) Thanks... It took 3 or 4 glasses of wine till I had the courage to post it. I´ll finally have it BR-ed by a kind soul. So, don´t worry. Next time it will be readable. Next part will be coming up as soon as I have it BR-ed. "Work while you have the light. You are responsible for the talent that has been entrusted to you."

Re: FDK-Even Steel Melts - part 1 #13953 07/20/04 07:59 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,202 the Netherlands Saskia Top Banana
Saskia Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,202 the Netherlands	MDL, there's a little icon on the top of your post that looks like a pad with pencil. If you use that, you can edit your text, including icons. Looking forward to more of your story. Saskia I tawt I taw a puddy cat!

Re: FDK-Even Steel Melts - part 1 #13954 07/20/04 10:43 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great start. Lois is starting a new life. Quote "Yes, yes… Listen Ms. Lane, we are still not sure if this position will be suitable for you. I know you are one of our best reporters but the burocratic work is not for reporters. We´re still looking for someone who would be ready to substitute our editor-in-chief there and since you don´t have the experience we require, We need to have an extra thought on that. We need someone with a very professional profile capable of sacrificing some of his or her personal life for the job. It´s a 24-7 occupation and I´m sure you understand what I mean." "Perfectly, sir. I´m sure I fit the profile." :rolleyes: I don't see Lois doing that job. Quote "Yes, my name is Stella and this is my personnal assistant, Gallan." Who are they? Interesting start don't stop posting. More soon, please. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK-Even Steel Melts - part 1 #13955 07/20/04 03:07 PM
Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 845 Rio de Janeiro - Brazil Mad Dog Lane Features Writer
Mad Dog Lane Features Writer Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 845 Rio de Janeiro - Brazil	Thanks guys. I´ll be posting another part as soon as SQD sends it BR-ed to me and ASA i can find where the hell did i put the other wine bottle. Quote I don't see Lois doing that job. I agree with you Maria. But Lois fit the profile of hard-worker. Let´s see if she can manage to get the job. quote: -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Yes, my name is Stella and this is my personnal assistant, Gallan." -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Quote Who are they? As the Prankster assistant would say... "that´s for you to know and for me to find out". See you soon "Work while you have the light. You are responsible for the talent that has been entrusted to you."

Re: FDK-Even Steel Melts - part 1 #13956 07/22/04 01:50 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner
LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland	Quote "that´s for you to know and for me to find out". Or, as LabRat says, RAFO (Read And Find Out) This is an interesting premise - looking forward to seeing where you take us from here. Keep writing, keep having fun. You've already got the right attitude for dealing with inquisitive readers. <G> LabRat Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly. Aramis: Yes, sorry. Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal. The Musketeers

Re: FDK-Even Steel Melts - part 1 #13957 07/22/04 07:15 AM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 118 Brazil Ingra Hack from Nowheresville
Ingra Hack from Nowheresville Joined: May 2003 Posts: 118 Brazil	Great Start! Ingra Clark: What is that? Lois: It's my word. Clark: There is no such word. Lois: Sure there is. Someone's a chump, therefore, he's chumpy. Clark: Try again. Lois: Are you challenging me? Clark: You bet your sweet little chumpy I am.

Re: FDK-Even Steel Melts - part 1 #13958 07/22/04 08:08 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL Shadow Pulitzer
Shadow Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL	Great start! I'm glad you're writing! Can I make a suggestion? Oh, I should introduce myself. Hi, my name is Jen and I open my mouth whenever possible. I consider talking a hobby. Everything sounds just fine the way it's written, but if you want, you don't have to put things in parentheses. Quote "Well, maybe being different from everyone makes it hard for him to fit in." (He tried hard not to be too obvious). Stuff like that can be tagged on to the end... "Well, maybe being different from everyone makes it hard for him to fit in." He tried hard not to be too obvious. For example. But if you like it the way it is, don't change it!! It's only a minor suggestion from a loopy artist. I look forward to the next part! One last thing: /me glares at Stella. She better not horn in on Lois & Clark LOL...I know I know, RAFO (ray-fo). I like saying that out loud LOL. Jen President of The Crazy Artist's Club "Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy

Re: FDK-Even Steel Melts - part 1 #13959 07/22/04 04:08 PM
Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 845 Rio de Janeiro - Brazil Mad Dog Lane Features Writer
Mad Dog Lane Features Writer Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 845 Rio de Janeiro - Brazil	Quote Everything sounds just fine the way it's written, but if you want, you don't have to put things in parentheses. Stuff like that can be tagged on to the end... But if you like it the way it is, don't change it!! It's only a minor suggestion from a loopy artist. I look forward to the next part! One last thing: /me glares at Stella. She better not horn in on Lois & Clark LOL...I know I know, RAFO (ray-fo). I like saying that out loud LOL. Hi Jen.. ) "Work while you have the light. You are responsible for the talent that has been entrusted to you."

Re: FDK-Even Steel Melts - part 1 #13960 07/23/04 07:16 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 720 South Side of Nowhere stopquitdont Columnist
stopquitdont Columnist Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 720 South Side of Nowhere	Interesting premise... I want to know who Stella is, too! Guess I'll definitely find out. Nice to have a newcomer with lots of fresh ideas! Can't wait to read them (and beta them ). SQD

Re: FDK-Even Steel Melts - part 1 #13961 07/23/04 02:36 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 199 Brazil but living in Temecula,... Quel Lane Hack from Nowheresville
Quel Lane Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 199 Brazil but living in Temecula,...	Hi, Erica I'm enjoying the story so far. I'm curious to know who Stella is and what she is up to. I hope Lois won't go to London though Welcome to the boards and enjoy everything! Nice to see another Brazilian writing here I can't wait to read the next part of your story! Raquel "It's not the years that count, it's the moments, right now as they happen." (Clark Kent to Lois Lane - Brutal Youth - S4)

Re: FDK-Even Steel Melts - part 1 #13962 07/23/04 03:38 PM
Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 845 Rio de Janeiro - Brazil Mad Dog Lane Features Writer
Mad Dog Lane Features Writer Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 845 Rio de Janeiro - Brazil	hey Quel, You´re famous around here . I guess ChiefPam, "Work while you have the light. You are responsible for the talent that has been entrusted to you."

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