FDK-Even Steel Melts - part 1 - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Interesting premise so far

Wonder who is this Stella

Jose

Gee, had to re-write again. Thumbs down is not what I want for my first story)

Thanks...

It took 3 or 4 glasses of wine till I had the courage to post it.

I´ll finally have it BR-ed by a kind soul. So, don´t worry. Next time it will be readable. Next part will be coming up as soon as I have it BR-ed.

MDL, there's a little icon on the top of your post that looks like a pad with pencil. If you use that, you can edit your text, including icons.

Looking forward to more of your story.

Saskia

Hi,

Great start.

Lois is starting a new life.

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"Yes, yes… Listen Ms. Lane, we are still not sure if this position will be suitable for you. I know you are one of our best reporters but the burocratic work is not for reporters. We´re still looking for someone who would be ready to substitute our editor-in-chief there and since you don´t have the experience we require, We need to have an extra thought on that. We need someone with a very professional profile capable of sacrificing some of his or her personal life for the job. It´s a 24-7 occupation and I´m sure you understand what I mean."

"Perfectly, sir. I´m sure I fit the profile."

:rolleyes: I don't see Lois doing that job.

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"Yes, my name is Stella and this is my personnal assistant, Gallan."

Who are they?

Interesting start don't stop posting.

More soon, please.

MAF

Thanks guys.

I´ll be posting another part as soon as SQD sends it BR-ed to me and ASA i can find where the hell did i put the other wine bottle.

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I don't see Lois doing that job.

I agree with you Maria. But Lois fit the profile of hard-worker. Let´s see if she can manage to get the job.

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"Yes, my name is Stella and this is my personnal assistant, Gallan."

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Who are they?

As the Prankster assistant would say...

"that´s for you to know and for me to find out".

See you soon

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"that´s for you to know and for me to find out".

Or, as LabRat says, RAFO (Read And Find Out)

This is an interesting premise - looking forward to seeing where you take us from here.

Keep writing, keep having fun.

You've already got the right attitude for dealing with inquisitive readers. <G>

LabRat [Linked Image]

Great Start!

Ingra

Great start! I'm glad you're writing! Can I make a suggestion? Oh, I should introduce myself. Hi, my name is Jen and I open my mouth whenever possible. I consider talking a hobby.

Everything sounds just fine the way it's written, but if you want, you don't have to put things in parentheses.

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"Well, maybe being different from everyone makes it hard for him to fit in."

(He tried hard not to be too obvious).

Stuff like that can be tagged on to the end...

"Well, maybe being different from everyone makes it hard for him to fit in." He tried hard not to be too obvious.

For example. But if you like it the way it is, don't change it!! It's only a minor suggestion from a loopy artist. I look forward to the next part!

One last thing: /me glares at Stella. She better not horn in on Lois & Clark LOL...I know I know, RAFO (ray-fo). I like saying that out loud LOL.

Jen
President of The Crazy Artist's Club

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Everything sounds just fine the way it's written, but if you want, you don't have to put things in parentheses.

Stuff like that can be tagged on to the end...

But if you like it the way it is, don't change it!! It's only a minor suggestion from a loopy artist. I look forward to the next part!

One last thing: /me glares at Stella. She better not horn in on Lois & Clark LOL...I know I know, RAFO (ray-fo). I like saying that out loud LOL.

Hi Jen..

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Interesting premise... I want to know who Stella is, too! Guess I'll definitely find out.

Nice to have a newcomer with lots of fresh ideas! Can't wait to read them (and beta them

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SQD

Hi, Erica

I'm enjoying the story so far. I'm curious to know who Stella is and what she is up to. I hope Lois won't go to London though

Welcome to the boards and enjoy everything! Nice to see another Brazilian writing here

I can't wait to read the next part of your story!

Raquel
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hey Quel,

You´re famous around here

. I guess ChiefPam,