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Hi,

Great part. smile1


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Nicely done, Leela smile I think it'd be permissable, at the end of this section, to say his hand started wandering again, without giving any specifics.

Oh, and I think it'd be really cool if they started having some of these conversations telepathically. You know, while they're too busy kissing to talk the normal way. You've established that they can do it if they want to, so I'm curious to see it.

Loved the part where they talk about recognizing soulmates. Beautiful.

PJ


"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."

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Good part! smile1


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Gasp! Choke! Oh my God! Wow! FINALLY! She is doing great and he is such a doll for stopping to keep his promise. And then Leela goes and leaves us all as frustrated as Lois, LOL! Ok leela get back her and give her a you know what! Anyway, this is really a great story. we have all waited years for moments like this between them to happen. As usual, I can't wait for more. Thank you Leela, great job! Laura


Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”

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Good post, very...discreet.

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Also read Nan's Terran Underground!

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