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Posted By: mariadferdez. FDK:Long Strange Trip: Part 63 - 06/18/04 04:42 PM
Hi,

Great part. smile1
Posted By: ChiefPam Re: FDK:Long Strange Trip: Part 63 - 06/19/04 06:23 AM
Nicely done, Leela smile I think it'd be permissable, at the end of this section, to say his hand started wandering again, without giving any specifics.

Oh, and I think it'd be really cool if they started having some of these conversations telepathically. You know, while they're too busy kissing to talk the normal way. You've established that they can do it if they want to, so I'm curious to see it.

Loved the part where they talk about recognizing soulmates. Beautiful.

PJ
Posted By: daneel Re: FDK:Long Strange Trip: Part 63 - 06/20/04 08:42 AM
Good part! smile1
Posted By: Laurach Re: FDK:Long Strange Trip: Part 63 - 06/20/04 10:50 AM
Gasp! Choke! Oh my God! Wow! FINALLY! She is doing great and he is such a doll for stopping to keep his promise. And then Leela goes and leaves us all as frustrated as Lois, LOL! Ok leela get back her and give her a you know what! Anyway, this is really a great story. we have all waited years for moments like this between them to happen. As usual, I can't wait for more. Thank you Leela, great job! Laura
Posted By: Mister Data Re: FDK:Long Strange Trip: Part 63 - 06/22/04 06:57 AM
Good post, very...discreet.

James
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