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#128974 07/09/04 06:26 PM
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Laura, how sweet! *sigh* (I seem to be doing that a lot lately). I've always loved that dilemna that Lois had, loving two men at the same time and thinking she was stupid (for lack of a better word) for doing so.

I do have to mention a typo:

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Whenever we though
I think you mean touch. But clap brava! A really sweet vignette.

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#128975 07/10/04 12:17 AM
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Wow, Laura! This is lovely smile I can really see this as Lois's attitude throughout, to both Clark and Superman. Very nicely done.

If this is what you can do in 30 minutes, I hope you have several hours free over the next few months! goofy


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#128976 07/10/04 01:28 AM
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Wow! You wrote that in 30 minutes?? eek

Fantastic!! clap clap I'm in such a loss for words this is all I can say.

Keep writing!
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Nice internal recap of the development of the relationship. Lois' wistful memories work very well here.

But I'll bet this actually took you more than thirty minutes. Probably more like 35.

Tank (who finds the fact that people tend to equate 'love at first sight' with romanticism when in reality it is quite superficial)

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WOW, this is beautifully written. smile1

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#128979 07/11/04 02:19 AM
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Wow, Laura, this is excellent. thumbsup

Even though love at first sight might be pretty superficial, it's still a beautiful concept, isn't it? wink

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Sooo wonderful smile1


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#128981 07/25/04 03:15 AM
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Very nice Laura. I caught one typo though. I bet it was Word's auto spell check.

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Whenever we though, I feel a small spark of electricity passing through our skin. It feels so amazing. So *right*.
It should say touch right? Laura


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