Laura, how sweet! *sigh* (I seem to be doing that a lot lately). I've always loved that dilemna that Lois had, loving two men at the same time and thinking she was stupid (for lack of a better word) for doing so.

I do have to mention a typo:

I think you mean touch. But brava! A really sweet vignette.

Sara

Wow, Laura! This is lovely I can really see this as Lois's attitude throughout, to both Clark and Superman. Very nicely done.

If this is what you can do in 30 minutes, I hope you have several hours free over the next few months!


Wendy

Wow! You wrote that in 30 minutes??

Fantastic!! I'm in such a loss for words this is all I can say.

Keep writing!
AnnaBtG.

Nice internal recap of the development of the relationship. Lois' wistful memories work very well here.

But I'll bet this actually took you more than thirty minutes. Probably more like 35.

Tank (who finds the fact that people tend to equate 'love at first sight' with romanticism when in reality it is quite superficial)

Laura

WOW, this is beautifully written.

Tricia

Wow, Laura, this is excellent.

Even though love at first sight might be pretty superficial, it's still a beautiful concept, isn't it?

~Julia

Sooo wonderful

Very nice Laura. I caught one typo though. I bet it was Word's auto spell check.

It should say touch right? Laura