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Okay, I read it.  This is great, teej!  You are a most excellent writer!! and evil, Too!  Thanks for writing it, TJ! 
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he’d been cute and adorable and sweet and a host of other things she hadn’t expected from Superman, acting so out of character; “Hey, it’ll be fun!” he’d told her several times, a sloppy grin on his face.  Whipped cream smiley faces? A goofy hat with droopy ears and buck teeth? You're killing me here, Teej! I loved Lois, pulling out her pad and pencil, wanting to get down to business. And, of course, the ending! ROTFL Very well done! - Vicki
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this was fun to do! Line dancing is kind of like the one dimensional square dancing you were talking about, some preset moves to a country tune though you could apply it to the Macarena or the Electric Slide.
I've got this hang up about chocolate syrup and I know Clark's mom would go berserk if she saw his "S" stained like that.
Who's next now???
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Huh....so Lois knows....interesting.
Very funny, TEEEEEEEJ
Red Kryptonite could be the culprit here?
Oh Mr. Mxyzptlk???
Some ideas for whoever takes up the next baton...
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That’s great
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Great writing!
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TeeJ This is hilarious. ROTFL! I can't wait to read the next part. Tricia 
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So who's writing the next part? Or TJ, do you just want to finish it????
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I've got an idea about how to end it, but I'm working on another series (I Was Just Thinkin'...) on the Nfic board, so it may be awhile. I think this definately is a RED K story, but if some one else has a better way to explain it they need to jump in or I'm going back in after my Nfic series (I Was Just Thinkin'...shameless plug, I know  ) is over. Maybe you guys can toss out some ideas and who ever does go next can incorporate them into the story? TEEEEEJ
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I was thinking that since Lois called him Superman when he woke up, even though she knows he's Clark, then she probably found out because he was talking in his sleep or something. Edit: I had originally asked someone, I will not say who *ahemjulieahem*, to write part three, but last time I talked to her about it (which was actually very long ago) she said she hadn't even read part two. So, if anyone wants to take the responsibilty off her hands, please feel free to do so. Of course, until someone else volunteers, Julie is not off the hook so: Nag Nag Nag Nag Nag! 
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Hey....no one can do part three here??? T J, I know you're in the middle of a story....I'm still editing Jungle Love for the archive...isn't there ANYONE to take up the mantle of part three?
Something sexy and waffy would be good here!
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Not one to nag, but I'm under orders. Seriously, did I miss something? It didn't stop here, did it? 
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Shhh... I am being nagged enough here. I was assigned (that's right, assigned. I didn't volunteer to do this ) part 3 by Mary, and she's been nagging me hardcore. I'll try to finish it as soon as I can, if she doesn't pull out the ficus on me first. Julie
Mulder: Imagine if you could come back and take out five people who had caused you to suffer. Who would they be?
Scully: I only get five?
Mulder: I remembered your birthday this year, didn't I, Scully?
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