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Ohh!!! You posted soon!! 
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Ooh, I'm so excited about a new part!  So, wow, one step forward and no steps back! That's gotta be a record <g> Loved Clark trying to keep that goofy grin off his face  Write more, post more! As soon as RL (not you, Roger) allows. PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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One quick comment on a type o I think. At one point you wrote " His eyes looked at his" I think you meant, Her eyes loked at his. Anyway glad you posted. It was a bit short for my liking because of how long you make us wait in between sections, but it was good. She seems to be slowly coming to terms with his presence. I hope you don't wait so long to post the next bit. I'd really like to see them progress a bit more. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Laura:
Thanks for the catch. I fixed it.
As far as length and frequency - hey... I really am giving all I've got. My life is hectic - I can't change that, nor would I want to - I love the parts that make it hectic.
As far as the pace of the story - it moves as it wishes, I just write it down :-)
Silence is violence. End white supremacy based violence
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Hey Leela, Nice part! They're making progress slowly but surely. Can't wait for MORE! ~Liz
Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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Hi, Great part.  More ASAP, please. MAF 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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Leela A wonderful part! Tricia 
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Leela,
glad you are posting
I'm just behind
good part - progress
merry
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This continues to be an original and interesting story.
The only problem I have is that it will take to at least instalment number 100 before Lois is 'back' and able to function normally around Clark.
Tank (who thinks that with L's 'hectic' life he won't live long enough to see this fic finished)
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Don't lose hope, Tank... we're already on part 47, so getting to part 100 should only take, maybe, another three years. Four, tops I hope you've still got that much life in you!  PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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I was going to work at home today to do finish up the chapter (which is mostly done, and i like it)
But I found out I get monday off (new company owner, and that company observes monday as a holiday!!) So i"ll post monday!
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