One quick comment on a type o I think. At one point you wrote " His eyes looked at his" I think you meant, Her eyes loked at his. Anyway glad you posted. It was a bit short for my liking because of how long you make us wait in between sections, but it was good. She seems to be slowly coming to terms with his presence. I hope you don't wait so long to post the next bit. I'd really like to see them progress a bit more. Laura
As far as length and frequency - hey... I really am giving all I've got. My life is hectic - I can't change that, nor would I want to - I love the parts that make it hectic.
As far as the pace of the story - it moves as it wishes, I just write it down :-)
Don't lose hope, Tank... we're already on part 47, so getting to part 100 should only take, maybe, another three years. Four, tops I hope you've still got that much life in you!