Thank you everyone for your feedback I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.
I've had a few messages telling me how to fix the formatting issue etc, so I've done that now. Thanks for your help there, too. Hopefully it's easier to read now.
Feli
"It means never having to play it cool about how much you like something. It's basically a license to proudly emote on a somewhat childish level rather than behave like a supposed adult. Being a geek is extremely liberating."- Simon Pegg
I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.
