Hi there, Laura wink

That was very good! To be honest, I liked it more than 'Let it snow'. I think the subect is more to my taste. Anyway.

First of all, LOL at the opening scene! I'd swear it was Lois's thinking!
But, frankly, the rest of the story was just as good. Excellent writing (easy to understand yet not foolish or childish... my favourite!!) and wonderful ideas about the story. I loved it.

See ya soon and KEEP WRITING wink
AnnaBtG.

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