Thanks for your comments everyone. As for the formatting problems, I am working on fixing it now -- I always seem to have this stupid problem when I paste from a text file -- so I am going to paste the story into word and then try to paste it to the mbs.

Laura "The Yellow Dart" U. (Alicia U. on the archive)

"A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." -- Christopher Reeve