Lovely happy ending...just as it should be. And a really fun plot for this one.
For this story, however, I confess I still want to kick Lois from here to Sunday. (Just what does that expression mean anyway?) And I think the reason is, actually, because of the length.
Let me try to explain....In the 40-parters
, you give equal time to showing us the neurotic, flawed Lois and the healed, trusting person she becomes with some help from our boy Clark. In a short (er
) story like this one, my head is happy with the plot resolution, but heart hasn't had time to forgive Lois and consider that she's now deserving of her happy ending. I'm wondering if this story should be either shorter (in the beginning parts) are longer...so that she can give the same amount of introspection to realizing how far she's come. Does that make any sense?
Whatever!
Another excellent outing.
Best,
Sherry
