Ah, sweeps. One of the many reasons I love May. wink

Great chapter! I'm a little dissappointed that Martha didn't let Lois back in and tear into her, but I suppose the story must go on.

Um, when is Clark going to let her know just why he's so melancholy all the time? Something to do with a man in tights? Or is it one of those situations where he only knows what Lois knows at the time (or at least, that's what he will claim)? Methinks that will not go over so well. And Lois seems so sensitive about the lying issue, especially now of all times, after discovering Luthor's betrayal of her. Surely Clark sees this, right? Right...? Clark! wallbash

Patrick? Patrick?! No! There's no Superman here! Don't go, Lois! Don't do it!

Can't wait for the next chapter! It's not as much FDK as usual, but I'm working my way back into the game. laugh Again, great job so far!


Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness.
--Mark Twain