I must admit that Adam West is my favorite Batman. But I like what you've got going here. It's nice to see the contrast between the two men.
“Gotham City is no Metropolis. My city isn’t as nice and clean as yours. The crimes are darker, the villains meaner and they need someone…” He looked Superman up and down. “… who understands the darker side of life better to find and capture them.”
Loved the line about Batman not wanting to be considered a side kick.
Lois confesses to Perry?? What is she thinking?
It doesn't seem like she can go on like this much longer without spilling the beans.
Joan
