Good part! I love how obsessed Clark is in this story- he's always obsessed with Lois, of course, but you really play it well in here.
The coffee boy?
Ooh, boy. Even if it's not Calvin something, it'll be awkward just because he'll probably tell Lois about how overprotective Superman is about her... and of course, Superman's the one who showed up to stalk... er, attend the charity event, so he can't play it cool or pretend to be Clark...
And I really liked this line:
Clark rallied his good humour and sent her what he hoped was a dazzling smile.
Even Clark knows it's dazzling...
Can't wait for the final chapter!
