Actually, I did reword that line twice, but I don't remember if I changed the part you drew out--glad you liked it so much!
Well, I'll confess that after I wrote the feedback, it occured to me... what if it was just a typo?
But I left my comment because if it *was* mistake, it was a most fortuitous one! It's good to know you wrote and re-wrote until you got it exactly the way you wanted it, because it was a great sentence!
