What a touching piece. I can only imagine the difficulty facing such a subject when you're dealing with it as well.
You did an excellent job capturing Superman's emotions. Can you even imagine being able to do all he does yet:
For all of my strength and power, there is nothing that I can do to fix this.
I love that you ended on a hopeful note. That his love for Lois will bring him through. Great job!
I'm guessing part two is from Lois' POV. That will be interesting to read.
Joan
