I love the way you have the L&C scripts woven into this tale. Lois is beginning to come back out of her shell and be LOIS. She will find her son if no one else can. The only problem I see is if the condoms fail and Clark fathers a child with Mayson (who hates his counterpart) and he has to tell her that she is the mother to Superman's child. That would make for a very messy and VERY long story trying to make that one come out right. SO you need to put Clark's glasses back on his (gorgeous)face and his clothes back on his (beautiful) body, and he needs to get out of there before this goes any further. He has a wonderful daughter, a son he needs to get to know, and eventually their mother in his life. He doesn't have time or energy for Mayson. (Now I'm really curious what you will do because it seems to me in my small mind that is your only choice.) SO, surprize me, SQD!
Enjoying this story like all of your fine work.
Pat
