Great start!
"This is photo of the death of Superman" - wow, what a kicker ending!
The hints of Bureau 39 - did they kidnap Lois and do experiments on her and the baby? /shudder/
What's happening to Clark on New Krypton? Are we going to see him at all? Is that important to the fic?
What will Martha say when she finds out?
Excellent dilemma already set up! I can't wait for more.
