Well, that was quite a roller coaster ride. I think that this is probably one of the most despicable Lex Luthors that I've ever seen. Oh, and what you've done to Lois is amazingly evil.
Outside in the corridor, the doctor stopped and leaned against the wall to take a deep breath, his evil grin wider than Luthor's. Few men had ever actually gotten the upper hand on Lex Luthor. He had done it. Not once, but several times.
We haven't heard the name of the doctor (and therefore don't know if he's an original character or someone from the show) and it's always nice to see Lex fooled, but his evil satisfaction doesn't make me feel much better. I'm so worried for Lois.
Help! Superman!
Does it make me a bad person to do the mental equivalent of plug my ears and sing, "la, la, la" whenever you write about anyone with the surname of Luckaby?
Bill Sr. was the CEO of Cost Mart
Ack! Intergang, too. Wow. My muse is bowing and scraping at the epic-ness of your story. Even more than before, I find the scope of your story to be a bit mind-boggling.
Oh, and in case I didn't make it clear before.
Lex. Ew.
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