Very sweet story, Anna. I love how the upcoming dinner drove all other thoughts from their minds. Jack is not one of my favorite characters, but he played a very useful role here. And I feel sorry for him at the end - here he's brought L&C together, and he may face the entire Elvis library! That would take some time...
Further re Lynn's comment about the timing of the dates - it's also confusing because each of the notes, presumably delivered on Saturday since they refer to the movie "last night", state that the dinner will be "tommorrow night", which would be Sunday. Yet both L&C read their notes and look at their clocks and start worrying about getting ready for the dinner
tonight, when it should be
tomorrow for them... Just a minor tweak.
Very nice job.
Kathy
