Hey Anna -
So sweet! I just loved this set up and how instead of being irritated with each other or Jack, Lois and Clark just let themselves enjoy the date and each other and let it take them to the next step.
I especially loved how you showed the parallel of Lois watching the Ivory Tower while Clark was watching a ballgame. I could totally picture them in their respective apartments. Great job setting the scene.
One minor nitpick - from what I garnered, their date was on a Saturday night. Yet when they said good-bye to each other, Clark tells Lois he will see her "tomorrow" at the office. So unless they work at the Planet on Sundays, you may want to tweak this wording a bit.
All in all, a fantastic story. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
Lynn
